second double page spread

first double page spread draft

contents page feedback

• the colour scheme throughout the page is good and only three colours are used.
• i like the issue subscription at the bottom of the right corner and i think it is a good touch to the contents page.
• the images and texts used are conventional and they are layed out like a contents page should be.
• i think the colour does work well but the text could be a different colour maybe

Peer Feedback on Contents Page

Multiple images on the contents page. I like the use of the different front covers. Also, the cover scheme is strong, making the text bold and easy to read.

Could some texture, gradient or some drop shadows be applied to some areas to add some depth?

Luke Hallett